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What Makes a Good Personal Statement?

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A lot goes into applying to graduate school! From wrangling transcripts to CV revisions, it’s no secret that application time can be stressful. A very important piece that is often over thought by students is the personal statement.  

Why are Personal Statements Important?

A personal statement is your opportunity to tell the story of who you are. Your resume or CV details your prior education and experience. The personal statement is an insight into your personality and goals.  

It’s tough to distill your life experiences into a 650 – 1000 word essay.  

We’ve put together some tips to help! 

Tip #1: Tell a Story

These days, storytelling is everything. A strong personal statement doesn’t read like a list of accomplishments; instead, it connects your life experiences into a clear narrative.  

The key is showing progression; how your past experiences led you to apply to this program and how the program fits into your future. The “story” might be a research project that you’re proud of and learned a lesson from or a professional challenge that shaped your goals. 

A strong personal statement makes it clear why this program is the right next step. 

Tip #2: Keep the Focus Clear - You!

Remember, the personal statement is about you. Admissions committees already know how impressive their program is. What they want to know is why it’s the right place for your academic and professional growth. Be specific about your interests, goals, and preparation.  

Try to avoid vague lines like, “This program is a perfect fit for my goals.”  

Instead, demonstrate fit by referencing specific elements like research areas, concentrations, faculty expertise, clinical opportunities, industry partnerships and the connection to your interests.  

A focused statement shows that you understand what you’re applying for and that you’ve thoughtfully considered how the program aligns with your goals. 

Tip #3: Address it Head-On

No one is perfect! If you had a bad semester and received a low grade or are missing a few criteria to be admitted to the program, your initial reaction may be to hope the admissions committee misses it.

Be upfront!

Not providing an explanation will hurt your changes more than explaining the issues head on. They will wonder why you didn’t mention it. Own the narrative and use this as an opportunity to show the admissions committee how you’ve grown over time. 

Tip #4: Review and Revise (Three Times)

Very few personal statements are strong in their first draft. Revision is what takes good statements to great ones.  

Start by reviewing for content:  

  • Does your statement clearly explain your goals?  
  • Does it tell a coherent story?  
  • Are there sections that feel repetitive or off topic?  

Next, review for clarity and structure. Make sure each paragraph serves a purpose and flows logically into the next.  

Finally, proofread carefully for grammar, spelling, and formatting. It can also be helpful to ask a mentor, advisor, or friend to review your statement as they may catch sections that need refined or offer suggestions you hadn’t considered.  

A strong personal statement doesn’t have to be perfect, but it does have to be purposeful.  

When you tell a clear story that shows your fit, you give admissions committees a meaningful sense of who you are and where you’re headed. Ultimately, your personal statement is more than an application requirement! It’s your opportunity to articulate your direction, your motivation, and your readiness for what comes next. 

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